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Terry Angelos's avatar

Loved this piece, this invitation into a part of your younger self. When my memoir came out many of my peers and friends asked why I hadn't told I was struggling and I said that I didn't have the language and understanding of what was happening at the time. Even with all the labels available today I think it can still happen. I wrote to make sense of those times when things felt off so this was personal but relatable too.

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Amy Collins's avatar

Thank you and I’m glad to hear it. In some ways it feels like it’s still a draft not a finished piece. But I was able to write it without emotion, as objectively as possible, and that feels important.

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Gillian Hill's avatar

Loved this one Amy. At first read, I wanted more of a buttoned up ending with some inspirational message. But then I thought about all the things we experience as kids that don't end that way, and thought this was better.

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Amy Collins's avatar

Thank you! I wanted to leave it open for the reader to get their own message or point from it. After being in so many toxic dynamics in my life I don’t know that there are many buttoned up messages. Or maybe I’m doing essays wrong lol

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